Mokie and Bik

Tuesday, August 08, 2006

Drafting Mokie and Bik

A bit of the first draft, from July 2003.

Long ago, when your grandfather was a baby, Anne and Anthony lived on a boat.

It was like living in a house, except that if they wanted to move, the house could go too.
Instead of a garden, the sea was all around them.
Instead of a sidewalk and a road, there was a gangplank and a wharf.

Anne and Anthony were twins.
They were born on the same day.
"I'm older!" said Anne.
"Only an hour," sais Anthony.
"That's enough," said Anne.


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